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A Poet Haunted by Brokenness

Brokenness haunts the pages of Kathleen Graber’s new collection of poems, The Eternal City, chosen by Paul Muldoon to re-introduce the distinguished Princeton Series of Contemporary Poets. An award-winning poet who teaches at Virginia Commonwealth University, Graber has drawn her poetic inspiration from Mark Doty, Charles Wright and Stephen Dunn, among other contemporary writers. Graber’s work focuses on illuminating the life of the mind through a tapestry of richly drawn and arresting images.


In Graber’s poems, past, present, and future states of mind are coexistent with real and imagined worlds. This adds complex layering to her elegant and well-crafted long lines. In the poem “The Magic Kingdom,” death and loss mingle with memories of childhood games, and girls in gingham dresses are the ones who foretell the damage that lies ahead: Oh no. You forgot to say forever!

The opening lines of "Some Great Desire" offer additional insight into the poet's general theme for this collection:


Because here is not here anymore, meaning what was once
at Konigsplatz has been moved to Grosser Stern,
. . . soon enough
I'll learn that I've been looking in the wrong place,
but no matter, for whatever figures from the Siegesallee
remained after the bombings were carted off . . .

While there is unmistakable regret in what has been “carted off,” things nevertheless continue to exist, occupying a landscape of the mind, as recorded history, personal memory, or even yet to be realized dream imagery. Shape-shifting and particularity-making, Graber's themes encompass a vast array of subjects, from religious iconography to graffiti to placards of state bureaucracy, yet in her skillful hands, the images cohere and we travel with her, those 285 spiral steps of the Siegessaule. 


In the poem “Dead Man,” a shadow exists alongside the speaker’s newborn nephew:


Sometimes we coo to soothe him: Don’t cry, Little Bird, I know, I know.
But only the roar of the vacuum finally calms him,
for nothing sounds as much
like the lost world of the womb as the motors of our machines.
The root of travel means torture, having passed from Medieval Latin

The intention of the poet to attach the words “vacuum” to “womb” and “torture” is as stark as their placements, one atop the other. We are meant to read them as connected in some way, and while Graber does not spell out the connection, through the long, broken lines, a shadow lingers. And later in the book we read:


Yesterday, I read about a genetic disorder:
the afflicted are driven to hurt themselves & those they love.

Graber is passionately concerned with the nature of intelligence and the human capacity for sinful or irrational choice. In “The Third Day” Graber tells the familiar tale of Augustine and the stolen pears with poetic precision:


so ugly, inedible, in fact, that he knew, even as he took them,
that there were better ones at home. It is difficult to say
what he means by unmaking, but this is what sin is & does,
he warns, as we stray, disordered, away from the perfection
which made us toward the nothing from which we are made.

Is evil something that exists in itself, or is it instead the absence of the good? Graber’s poem addresses Augustine’s view of “unmaking” as disintegration and decline. It seems we settle for sin until we, like the prodigal son, begin even to envy the pigs their pods. Lost in longing,


we fill our hands when they are
empty. We empty ourselves when we have held too much too long.

In “The Synthetic A Priori,” Graber demonstrates her skill in moving the reader from a present event to an imagined past to larger themes and focusing attention on the specific elements she wants to represent:


At a church rummage sale, I study the perfection of shadows
in a painting by Caravaggio, although what I hold
is only a small print of Christ—its frame broken—dining
at Emmaus with three of the Apostles.

Never mind that the biblical story isn’t told quite right, her skillful use of syntax and her pacing of the drama keep us engaged. Even without a formal rhythmic underpinning, the impression gained from reading her work is to have come across something elegantly crafted and almost classical in form. Further down in the poem, she moves from concrete images to the abstract with equal proficiency:


Tenebrous:
that rich, convincing darkness. As though the master understood
that the obscured world only seems to us somehow
even more familiar, as though our sense of our own unknowing
had at last been made visible—even if what we do not know
cannot itself be seen.

Her ability with metaphor is masterful. Consider this startling image from the prologue poem: “Tolle! Lege!” where conversion is described as something whole but wholly shattered in the moment just before breaking. Both Augustine and St. Paul, converts for whom the prior world broke completely, could be imagined concurring:


What I know of conversion
I learned while cleaning the sticky shelves of the icebox,
A glass sheet exploding as one end hit the sink’s hot suds.
For a single moment, as fissures crackled along the body,
I held something both whole & wholly shattered,
Then, form gave way, it broke a second time, & was gone.

Additional shattering follows:


I caught
my own reflection in a heavy mirror affixed to a wall
I smashed it & packed my pockets with as much of myself
as I could.

With all the seriousness of her themes, Graber has a sense of humor, too. Who can’t smile when coming across these lines from “The Heresies”:


And in Jenkintown, a man is trying to achieve ethical ecstasy,
having given away all of his money to charity

Sometimes Graber’s images are so tightly packed that they arrive like subway cars at rush hour, with no room for the passengers waiting on the platform. Sometimes they are so specific that the two pages of notes at the conclusion of her work are only somewhat helpful in unpacking the poems.

Graber’s words require careful reading and rereading. Poems impose a logic of symbols, an ordering of argument, with enough clues to keep the reader on track. There is a unique satisfaction in following a set of images, rhythms, and voicing to get the effect of what Emily Dickinson called “saying it slant.”

Layers of meaning attach to Graber's carefully wrought lines. In one of the later poems, she writes:


In three weeks I will be gone. Already my suitcase stands
overloaded at the door. I’ve packed, unpacked, & repacked it,
making it tell me again & again what it couldn’t hold.

And also from “The Heresies”:


That the truth is both visible & blinding. That the alloyed belly of the world—
nickel & iron—poured from the great madness of Wisdom, who,
expelled from the Divine Light for seeking the cause of what is cause-less,
wants now only to be rejoined with what she had lost.

A brilliant new voice is calling out from these exquisitely drawn verses.

Losana Boyd is the Executive Director of Creative & Marketing Services at First Things. She recently completed her MFA in poetry from Hunter College in New York City.

Comments:

11.5.2010 | 1:45pm
And what, except for its affected lineation, distinguishes this from prose? She'd never have made the cut for inclusion in Grace Notes. Of course, neither would Muldoon.
11.5.2010 | 8:28pm
gow says:
@Timothy Murphy: clearly the National Book Award committee disagrees.
11.6.2010 | 12:38am
This woman is in serious need of a psychiatrist and 90 mgs. of cymbalta ...before she hurts herself!
11.6.2010 | 7:15am
Bop says:
**although what I hold
is only a small print of Christ—its frame broken—dining
at Emmaus with three of the Apostles."

Never mind that the biblical story isn’t told quite right -----**

Why shouldn't we mind?
11.6.2010 | 10:30am
ahem says:
Just the same old academic sausage. How debased our culture has become: mediocrity is mistaken for talent.
11.6.2010 | 8:16pm
A Lyttle says:
My verdict is less kind:
Prose worthy of one of those dreadful, dull, self-important audio essays on NPR, randomly broken up into separate lines so that the banality will seem slightly more profound. Exquisitely drawn? How about slovenly, shapeless, sentimental trash? But I did kind of see the unformed kernel of a poem in the final quotation from "the heresies"--the sort of thing that someone with a disciplined poetic gift could make into a real poem.
And if this isn't doggerel, then Rod McKuen ought to have been given the Nobel Prize:
I caught
my own reflection in a heavy mirror affixed to a wall
I smashed it & packed my pockets with as much of myself
as I could.
11.7.2010 | 7:27am
Muldoon can write poetry on the rare occasions he so chooses. From his 850 page Collected I'd extract a dozen marginal poems and use the rest as tinder for my fire. I'm glad to see so many First Things readers, my readers, sharing my low opinion of this dreadful book.
12.10.2010 | 5:37pm
Tim DeJong says:
I've not read The Eternal City, but I have read - and enjoyed - a few of Graber's striking and somewhat unconventional poems. The comments above only further my sense that this review doesn't quite do Graber's poetry justice. Perhaps her verse is ill-suited to being quoted out of its context, or perhaps this reviewer has simply failed to present the most opportune or significant passages from her poems. Really, the title of this review says it all; it's hard not to cringe at the weight of cliche in the phrase "haunted by brokenness" - not a phrase Graber would necessarily want attributed to herself. Banal sentences like "Her ability with metaphor is masterful" serve as ill lighting for the complexity of Graber's poems, some of which are almost like thought puzzles piecing themselves together. Readers despairing over the state of contemporary poetry are advised to read Graber's poems themselves, rather than this review, before judging about her poetic skill. See, for example:

http://www.newyorker.com/fiction/poetry/2008/02/11/080211po_poem_graber
http://kickingwind.com/graber.html
http://www.newyorker.com/fiction/poetry/2010/05/17/100517po_poem_graber
12.11.2010 | 1:28am
Dblade says:
Ted, this review was meant to be complementary though. The first poem you linked is even worse:

"Two little girls emptied their Ziplocs of Pepperidge Farm Goldfish

onto the carpet & picked them up, one by one, with great delicacy,

before popping them into their mouths. Their mother, outside

smoking, kept an eye on them through the glass. After my cousin died,

my father died & then my brother. Next, my father’s older brother

& his wife. And, finally, after my mother died, I expected..."


It's really not that good. You could take the last stanza of the poem, put it by itself without the lines above it, and that could be seen as decent. But I'm reading them and I don't see where the reviewer is in error about the quality of her work. The second one is better but she still needs some serious economy to cut the NPR prose out. The third one is again similar to the review: many lines in dull prose. I don't see where those challenge the comments made.
12.11.2010 | 1:57am
Dblade says:
For example, from the Magic Kingdom:


"One morning I found a lump in my breast & my vision narrowed

to a small dot & I began to sweat. My legs & arms felt weak,

& my heart thrashed behind its bars. We were not written

to be safe. In the old tales, the woodcutter’s daughter’s path

takes her, each time, through the dark forest. There are new words

for all of this: a shot of panic becomes the rustle of glucocorticoid

signalling the sympathetic nervous system into a response

regulated by the sensitivity of the hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal axis."


I'm nowhere near a poet or academic, but I couldn't help trying to rewrite some of it, doggerel mine may be:

"One morning my vision narrowed, my heart writing
unsafe words on walls and throwing
thrashing, sweat-filled fits behind its barred door.
The tales took the woodcutter's daughter
every time, without escape, through darkened paths.
The old fear fought in new words: panic becoming a rustle
of glucocorticoid signing the sympathetic systems
to make my nerves clatter, like charms
in the throat's doeskin pouch..."

I think free verse can have cadence, economy, and rhythm. I don't see why she feels the need to narrate in plain prose, especially when reading the second poem Tim linked.
12.14.2010 | 5:25pm
Tim DeJong says:
On second and third readings it seems clear to me that at least some of the above criticism of Graber's poetry is justified. What I like about these poems is Graber's undeniable ability to use singular moments and incidents in life as telling instances of our shared confrontations with the most pressing issues in human life - mortality, selfhood, history. Dblade's revision of her poem in the above comment is therefore lacking in that it leaves out all of what makes her version significant: the lump in the breast, the starkness of "We were not written / to be safe," the contrast between the poem's lyrical beginning and its descent into the misery of scientific jargon (though I do somewhat like "the old fear fought in new words"). In any case, Graber's weakness is that she's not a particularly "poetic" poet, in the traditional sense; she doesn't appear to pay much attention to the rhythms and cadences of the language and her poetry is therefore too prosaic. (This becomes especially apparent when one reads her poems as if they were prose pieces.) Her strength, I maintain, lies in her ability to write with insight and originality about all our oldest and deepest fears. In other words, my appreciation of her work is content-based; but poetry has as much to do with form as with content, or is ideally the perfect merging of the two, and I concede that in the latter area Graber's poems often do fail to impress.
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