Well, its that time of year again, the paper-grading season. I thought Id share a particularly amusing/appalling incident with one of my students, as captured in this email of mine:
As I explained in the last email, the problems with your paper are not merely superficial, and not a result of your computer problems, or your misunderstanding certain style-book and citation rules and have[sic] to adjust to a different set of expectations. They are fundamental. The main arguments do not work. Many sentences are so plagued with errors that they are incoherent.
Just as in economics, there are rules to grammar, and you are responsible for knowing them.
In my note on the first page, which you say you cannot read due my poor hand-writing (tip: be more diplomatic with your professors!) I explain that your introduction promises to deliver an argument that it never does, and one which the few facts you do present openly contradict.
Sorry to have to underline the obvious, Barry, but the grade is an F. Due to rampant grade-inflation across our system, I only give out a handful of those each semester. In other words, your paper is really, really bad. It is a total failure.
I say this to you because you seem to remain oblivious. You say, Im going to have to, obviously, remarket and rebrand, and that will be challenging in this academic environment.
Barry, this is not Marketing 101, but Composition 101, and I know your business professor would find your application of marketing terminology to this case incorrect. You cannot rebrand horrible writing. Nor can you revise it, even if you wanted. Whoever has taught you to talk this way has done you a great disservice.
Yes, my syllabus allows you to revise one paper, but I will not allow you to do it with this one.
P.S. I do notice that challenging in this academic environment, is a dig at my grading fairness. I do not appreciate that sort of insulting behavior, and if it continues I will contact the honor committee.